That was a breath of fresh air! I am still trying to hash out my blog post, which basically a mini argumentative essay, and it is so easy to get bogged down in that type of academic writing it was awesome to read a creative work like this. The number one strength of this was how immersive it was - in fact, I was so immersed I just skipped over the pictures and continued to read the letter without noticing! It might have something to do with habits I've developed reading online articles, where there are pictures (often advertisements) between paragraphs that aren't very relevant to the text. After going back, I think the pictures were quite well integrated, but if you want them to be read chronologically I think you should make a small revision that directs the readers attention to the picture as it comes up. Otherwise, this is a masterpiece in terms of both quality of writing and content that relates to the course.